Wednesday, July 4, 2012

My First Ever Club Penguin Story :)

Hey Penguins!
I'm sorry I have been a little lazy with my blog posts, but that's because I'm writing a story! My very first Club Penguin story to share with all of you! It's called "The Best Dance Party Ever!" and here's a sneak peek! :)


“Come on Tayloro!” She laughed, “You’re being slower than a crab at Thin Ice!” I pulled my pass from under my shirt. The guard pulled down his agent sunglasses just enough to see my pass. He nodded and held the door open for me.
“Thank you.” I told him, flashing him a smile. He winked, and shut the door quickly behind me.
When I looked ahead of me, all I could see were anxious penguins. Some jumping up and down, some bragging about how they got there first, and one penguin was asleep on the couch. Later, I heard she’d fainted.
I looked on my tiptoes, and I could still see nothing. Chocolate pulled me down. “They’re here. I promise you.” That was easy for her to say, Penguins were screaming ‘PENGUIN BAND!’ ‘HEY! G BILLY, I’M YOUR BIGGEST FAN!’ and things like that. No doubt they were there alright.

How does it sound? Do you like it? What would you change? Please let me know! I'm writing this story for YOU! :) 

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